"I am above the earth now. I am no longer upright, to be knocked against and damaged. All is soft, and bending. (...) Out of me now my mind can pour." - Virginia Woolf
Reading your work so often feels like gazing into a snow globe: a vibrantly painted miniature world that echoes real world struggles in such a beautiful way. I saw myself in the tightrope walker, endlessly balancing between being the version of woman the world expects from me vs taking back my power. Brilliant work (as usual!) ☺️
That's it, I'm framing all of your comments ! You read so carefully, with so much heart. Thank you for your generosity, again and again. Seeing my words through other people's eyes is fascinating, I love reading what everyone is interpreting. I'm SO glad you pointed out the different style I tried to make it more dynamic, a physical manifestation of her panic, roughly being pulled out of her trance against her will
This hurt in that quiet, familiar way 🤍 the kind that doesn’t scream, just keeps walking. The tension between disappearing and being called back to life felt so real. I’m holding this one softly.
This is exactly how I feel when I write. Yes, it will hurt, but gently. It's like the ghost of a bruise, the distant echo of a slap, but you're trapped in a bubble as you read, safe. It always makes me smile when I find comments that really get it, thank you very much for your attentive reading !
Oh, this is such high praise ! Thank you very much, genuinely ! 🥹 Like I said, there's so much of me in these pieces. It reads as fiction, sure, because I think I can't navigate the world any other way, but it always comes from very real experiences or at least very real feelings (which is the case for every writer in a way, duh, but I mean it's not plucked out of thin air one bit. Do you get what I'm saying ? 😅)
Ugh! So hauntingly beautiful 🥹 I had goosebumps within the first few sentences. Beautiful imagery but also the care and depth you put into this is so clear! Amazing 👏🏾
Reading your work so often feels like gazing into a snow globe: a vibrantly painted miniature world that echoes real world struggles in such a beautiful way. I saw myself in the tightrope walker, endlessly balancing between being the version of woman the world expects from me vs taking back my power. Brilliant work (as usual!) ☺️
That's it, I'm framing all of your comments ! You read so carefully, with so much heart. Thank you for your generosity, again and again. Seeing my words through other people's eyes is fascinating, I love reading what everyone is interpreting. I'm SO glad you pointed out the different style I tried to make it more dynamic, a physical manifestation of her panic, roughly being pulled out of her trance against her will
You did an EXCELLENT job of it!! 💛💛
Also: I really love the use of the strikethroughs and caps/line breaks to represent the protagonist’s inner struggle, it really strengthens the story!
The imagery, the layered emotions, the flow!! You did not have to go this hard, but I’m glad you did 🥺 Absolutely loved it 🫶🫶
I'm very grateful for your support ! Thanks 🥰
This hurt in that quiet, familiar way 🤍 the kind that doesn’t scream, just keeps walking. The tension between disappearing and being called back to life felt so real. I’m holding this one softly.
This is exactly how I feel when I write. Yes, it will hurt, but gently. It's like the ghost of a bruise, the distant echo of a slap, but you're trapped in a bubble as you read, safe. It always makes me smile when I find comments that really get it, thank you very much for your attentive reading !
It did! in the best way. I appreciate you saying that. 🤍
My mind had been blessed by the images your words created, thank you, this was a gift from the stars to read, I absolutely adore your writing! 💙💙
Oh, you're just the sweetest, kindest gal 😭 if I made your mind travel a little, then I'm glad ❤️
You know I’m not much of a fiction reader but you’ve gotten me hooked so much. Your writing style and imagery is up there with some of the best!
Oh, this is such high praise ! Thank you very much, genuinely ! 🥹 Like I said, there's so much of me in these pieces. It reads as fiction, sure, because I think I can't navigate the world any other way, but it always comes from very real experiences or at least very real feelings (which is the case for every writer in a way, duh, but I mean it's not plucked out of thin air one bit. Do you get what I'm saying ? 😅)
No I get you, life experiences make writing fiction a lot easier I feel like in a way
Exactly ! I feel like great writers somehow manage to disappear behind their characters or the settings they choose, though. I'm not there yet haha
Uhh yeah you are actually! I feel like you should write a book!
Staaaaahp 😭🫶🏻
“A melancholic smile and it starts again for this lovely corpse full of dusty dreams. Too careless for vertigo, what a walking tragedy.” 😭✨
i really, really love your writing style 🤎
Oh ! Thank you so much 🥹
It's so beautifully written 🥹
I could feel every step she took on that fragile wire. Thank you for writing such an amazing piece❤️
Ugh! So hauntingly beautiful 🥹 I had goosebumps within the first few sentences. Beautiful imagery but also the care and depth you put into this is so clear! Amazing 👏🏾
Oh Emmy 🥹 Knowing you felt how much intention I put into my words makes me feel like I did a pretty good job, thank you !
Everything about this is perfect. Your style is incredible!
Aw, thanks man 😄🫶🏻
This was so well built! I could feel it all... I absolutely loved it! <3
Thank you very much for reading me ! I always feel so much joy, knowing I managed to really move something in people for a short moment 🥰
This was incredible. From the descriptions, the metaphors, the feelings, the imagery. I love your fiction so much ❤️😍
Thank you very much Dayana, I'm glad to have you in my corner 🥰
always, I'm such a fan ♥️